haaalin

@haaalin

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Eeeek

Giiiiirrrrrrl where’s the rest of it 😭😭😭

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Love re-reading this story

I’m back again reading this for the umpteenth time lol

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Where is the full version on Patreon?

Where is the full book on Patreon? The last time you updated that book was last year?

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Idiot

She’s a fucking idiot if she still goes to the ball without telling Elijah

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LOVE

I love this direction of the story!! Can’t wait for more

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Omg die already

Honestly can she just leave his ass already this is getting so out of hand now zzzz stupid asshole (btw love your work!!! I’m not angry at the author just the character 😂 so please continue writing)

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Meh

That last chapter was way too rushed and there were way too many errors, that it unfortunately took away a lot of meaning and effect from the story.

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