Kara Halime

AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, so, uh...My name is Halimah....and like, I LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVV reading and writing. I came across your story and today is the fifth day and I finished it. IT WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND KIM JUPITER, MY LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, no, not only him, all 8 of them are my loves now. That's it! It's final! Discussion end!!!! Your writing style, grammar, vocab, plus dialogues and plot and relations you built were....CHEF'S KISS!! Actually, I would complement your writing specially because I like to read stories in which two males are friends or males have a bonding.....but the ones I came across had off-limits content(like physically intimate or you know what) and I dont like those....but yours was clean and perfectly my style!!!!!!!!!!! I would request more.....

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Hey, so I just started reading this yesterday and finished it today, it was amazing. I specially loved how you managed to link all scenes and all events of past and present and what happened in between those 7 yrs, not a single loophole, as this is where I usually face difficulty in my writing. I love the bond between guys generally so I chose to read a story featuring two guys...though it was just a little off limits for my mental condition(due to physical intimacy beyond holding hands), but I skipped only those lines and read all of the rest... It was amazing! I loved Kellen Konrad and his character, his smile and laughter is so me!!!! Your vocab, your grammar, sentence style, structure and scene creating plus dialogue affect and pacing is just....WOW!!! If you would like to, read my stories too.... Thanks...