halimer

@halimer

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Good covered storyline

It feels very real

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Amazing storyline

Enjoyed the flow of story, characters, fun and balance between all these

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Keeping on toes

Compelling plots and story line

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Please complete

Hope this time story will be completed, this is tue 3rd tike reposted under different title 🙏

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Deserves to be published

Great writing and character development!

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