Diana Grace

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Little heavy on the Quoting

I've gotten through the first few chapters by this point. I like your character, but I feel like we don't get to see much of her because all of the action is on Harry and the gang. Focusing more on how Adrian sees the world and getting more into her head might be a good idea than using so many quotes from the movie.

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