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A Great One-Shot For You to Read

The repeated "How could he?" has to be my favorite line.
As a Warriors fan, I would have read this whatever it was like, but the start of the story and the way Pikedance's emotions were portrayed sucked me into the story. I could clearly tell when the flashbacks were happening, Leafstar's fury at Resinflame was handled excellently (no capital letters to signify anger!). And last of all, I could feel Rikedance's disbelief, sadness, and shock at the end of the story. Fantastic job!

I recommend this story for anyone who likes Warriors.

(A side note: although the names were a little unusual, I understand how you would want to populate StoneClan with your OCs.)

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