Andrew C.O

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Wow.

I've only read one chapter so far, but from what I've seen, this is steampunk at its best. The narrative flows so beautifully I could envision every scene in an almost cinematic fashion. I believe in the complexity of simplicity, and this story has that in its descriptions.

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Splendid.

The pace at which the story advances is decent, though a tad too fast. Nevertheless, it could be a device you are using. Start as you need to go, right? Iron out a few kinks in the tense and narrator and you're good.

I love the idea of 4 regions, 4 kings. It reminds me of the four generals of Alexander the great. It's a recipe for war and head-smashing action. Brilliant.

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Ooh!

The dark vein is kept all throughout the chapter. To be honest, I'd thought it would be one of those cliché things people get away with but it isn't. Sad there wasn't a second chapter at the time I was reading.

This be an excellent read. There is no fan of dark fantasy, Gothic or paranormal fiction that wouldn't find this captivating in the very least.

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