Drew C. Elyon

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Splendid.

The pace at which the story advances is decent, though a tad too fast. Nevertheless, it could be a device you are using. Start as you need to go, right? Iron out a few kinks in the tense and narrator and you're good.

I love the idea of 4 regions, 4 kings. It reminds me of the four generals of Alexander the great. It's a recipe for war and head-smashing action. Brilliant.

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Genius

You played with the subject of sex without overly grossing it out like most writers do. Full marks for that.

This be a fantastic light-hearted read. I've not (yet) gone beyond the first chapter, but I will be. The plot sounds like something that would grip me by the back of my neck,

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Wow.

I've only read one chapter so far, but from what I've seen, this is steampunk at its best. The narrative flows so beautifully I could envision every scene in an almost cinematic fashion. I believe in the complexity of simplicity, and this story has that in its descriptions.

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