Haspen Carina Cecilia

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What it is is brilliant!

You are uniquely able to drive the story forward rapidly, adding to the addictive and captivating nature of the story, without it being perceived as rushed. Not an easy balance act to maintain, so very nicely done! I love that you show the emotional struggle, progression and boundary pushing of their physical relationship and the way you are able to depict the complex mindset, emotions and anxiety of a teenage girl in this situation impressed the hell out of me actually. A great writer is able to push you out of your comfort zone, bring tears to your eyes at times, make you feel agony at times and happiness at times. A great writer forces you to open your mind, open your eyes and senses, enabling you to view the world just slightly clearer. I can't find the words to tell you how impressed I am with your work with this entire spectacular story.

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