Hufflepuff_King

In The Chamber Of Secrets

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Awesome

This book is honestly pretty good, I love the plot and ou are very well written. Well done.

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Its not the worst.

Not being horrible, Just advice. Me and many people don't like fanfictions where characters are added in, maybe write a fanfiction where its just the original characters. Also, descriptions and length of paragraphs matter! :)

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