Heather Campbell

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Well, I have to admit, I found this story difficult to start. I felt like the beginning was rushed and there wasn't a whole lot keeping me going except that I found the concept rather interesting. However, I was crying by the end. Those last few scenes were very well done and I enjoyed them. I rather wish the first half had been as good as the last half because you'd have the contest in the bag. :)

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