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The Cajun Hitman

The story is excellent! English must not be your first language. Keep writing!!I loved the cast and the exotic locations!

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A Serpent in Eden

I really enjoyed the story, I love the British setting! You could write an additional book about Jim Ferrett!

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Footsteps to Murder

I really enjoyed it! Did not expect it to end like that!

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The Curse Returns

Cute story, very exciting! I really want to know what happens next! Is there a part 3?

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Betrayal

Lived the twist at the end! A good read!

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Saving Selena

Super romantic, great story! Would love to read more of these characters!

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Emily z Book One of the Genesis Stones

I really enjoyed this story, would like to read more!

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The Call of the Tiger

I absolutely love this story!!! I really enjoyed the way the old folklore tales ended up being true! How the ones most skeptical of the old legends were turned into believers and how the heroes weren't perfect, they needed each other. I would love to read more!

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The Boy in the Purple Hat

Wow! Heartbreaking!

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Silence

Interesting! Needs a little editing, but pretty good overall!

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The Dare

I really enjoyed the story! Fascinating subject! Could have used some diagrams or explanations of some of the boat lingo. Will there be a Part II?

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The Zurich Papers

Wow! What a wild ride!

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The Cork Beat

I really enjoyed this story! Great plot and cast of characters! It is also very interesting that it is set in Cork, Ireland. Keep up the good work!

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The Cork Druid

I enjoyed your story, at first it seemed full of grammatical errors, but it may just be the Irish language differences. I really enjoyed the setting in Cork and the characters were great! Keep writing!

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An Adventure with Dada

Hilarious!!! I love it!!!

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Sy Goldman and the Case of the Beantown Butcher

Adorable story! I really enjoyed it! Was a little bit difficult to get into at first, but then it really got going! Love the weed toking seniors!

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Lost in Vegas

Great story, I really enjoyed it! Keep writing, you are very talented!

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His First His Second: An Alicia Friend Investigation

Really suspenseful, gripping and who would have thought it was the frigging butler? I really enjoyed your novel, keep up the good work!

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GC III Xeno Defense

Excellent! Please tell me this isn't the end! Its interesting to get the background stories of Decker, Ranger Baker, Cherubim and Black Cloud! Keep writing, you are so talented! I'm definitely hooked on your GC universe!!

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GC II: Xeno Activity

Interesting, but it ended at a strange place. Its like the intro is done, but the meat of the story is missing. Hopefully it will continue in the next book. I love your work!

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The Six Spires of Egtor

It was great, like all of your work, but the ending left a lot out! Keep creating, I love all of your books!

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Galaxy at War Book II

Loved it!!! Congrats on getting published!

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Adventures of a Greenie

Excellent! I really love this story! I am not normally a fan of science fiction, but you had me hooked from Chapter 1! Roy is an especially loveable character! Needs some editing, a couple places referred to Roy as Eric. Overall, an excellent story! There was so much going on with all of the characters, and you managed to weave it all together. I really love your work and can't wait for the sequel!

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The Midnight Agency

I really enjoyed the story! Great setup for a series! Interesting cast of characters. Would love to read more!

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The Curse

Cute story, sounds like there will be a part 2?

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Paranormal Agency Book 2 - The Funeral Home

Another exciting story! I love the characters! Would like to read more from them!

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Paranormal Agency Book 1 - The Soulless

Great story, can't wait to read more!

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Dark Sight (The Awakening Part One)

Great story, needs a little editing. Can't wait to read Part II

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Ten Minutes to Midnight

The monster resurfaces! I hope this saga will continue! As always, a very well written story!

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Suspicion - The One In Between

I love this series! Great characters, can't wait to read more!

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Death and Disclosure - a London Mystery

Loved it! I can't wait to read more!

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Friends and Family - A London Mystery

Loved it! The love triangle plus the vampires made for a very exciting story!

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Blood is their Argument

Excellent! Very well written!

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Memory Chasers

Loved it! I would definitely like to read more from these characters!

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Finding X

Interesting story!

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Alice

Loved the suspense. I never could figure out what was wrong with Alice's legs. Great read!

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Credence

Really good book! It got much more interesting towards the end! Would love to read more from these characters!

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Born of the Flame

I really enjoyed it! Hopefully there will be more to this story?

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Makeup and Murder

I really enjoyed it! Good story!

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Heidi, Geek Girl Detective

Great story, interesting plot!

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In the Victims Shadow

Good story.

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Under Mary's Oak

Very interesting! So much going on beneath the surface!

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The Immortality Plot

Wow, what a thriller! Definitely keeps you riveted til the end! Loved it!

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Split

I really enjoyed the story, would like to read more!

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On the Rocks: A Coven Cafe Mystery

Loved it! Would like to read more!

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Toast: A Coven Cafe Mystery Book 2

I really liked it! Can't wait to read more of the adventures of Angelica and friends!

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A Slice of Death: Coven Cafe Book 1

I loved the quirky characters and wouuld like to read more of their adventures!

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Trapped Between

Excellent! I really enjoyed it!

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The Good the Bad and the Ballykelly

Really funny, I enjoyed it very much!

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Emily's List

I enjoyed the story! Definitely a surprise at the end!

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Harsh Consequences

I really enjoyed your story!

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Ehat Goes Around Comes Around

Very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Out of the Shadow

Excellent! Very well written! It was interesting how the story was told as a lecture. Very suspenseful!

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The Cuckoo Conspiracy

Cute story! I'm surprised there was no mention of Mr. O'Leary finding out the clock was gone.

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Seroje: The Seeing Eye

I love your writing! You really captured how someone who is autistic can have amazing gifts, but still struggle with fitting in with society. It is great to read about such strong, smart, female characters!

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Bantering with a Dandy

Another great Banter adventure! I love reading your stories, so entertaining! Hope to read more!

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The Los Souls of Gilford Falls

Interesting story!

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Senshi

I really enjoyed this story! I didn't think I would like it because it's science fiction, but as usual, your writing is captivating! Hopefully there will be more adventures with these characters!

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Portside Screw

Great story! I loved the characters!

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Bantering with a Gun

Another great Banter adventure! Would love to read more of her! Thank you!

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Bantering with Murder

Another fantastic novel! I love the strong, smart, fearless women main characters!

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Bitten Babe

Another fantastic adventure for Nattie! Would love to read more of Viperia and the Osrisca's!

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Bitten

I love this story! I can't wait to read more!

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A String of Murder

I absolutely loved this story! So much suspense! The characters are great! I would love to read more of your work!

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Maddoc's Murder

Great story! I loved the suspense!

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The World of Mrs Cragbrook

Adorable story!

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Jugde Jury and Executioner

Great story! Love the setting in Australia!

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Darkroom

I really enjoyed it! Your writing style is great! It needs another character that you think is the killer, and then it turns out to be Frank.

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Guilty of Innocence

Very well written! Good plot twists!

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Raising the Black

Really good story!

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Aviana

Awesome! Can't wait for more of this story

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Maid for Him

Good story, needs editing

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The Haunting of Hillcrest Manor

Good story!

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Death at Penrose Hill

Good story!

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The Coastal Killings

This could be a best seller, but the plot needs some reworking. Maybe using a different point of view to tell the story. I really like your writing style!

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Pat Ruger Caribbean Shuffle

Nonstop action! Great story!

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The Angel and the Raven

Another fantastic adventure for the Angel and crew! I can't wait to read more of their exploits!

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The Angel's Christmas

Another fantastic story! Can't wait to read more about the adventures of Hawk's Weirdos!

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The Angel's Gambit

This is a very intriguing plot, can't wait to see what happens!

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The Angel Rallies Round

Another awesome story! Can't wait to read the next one!

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The Angel of San Diego

I loved it! Looking forward to more stories with these characters!

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A Red Light

This is a really good story! It is interesting that it is set in Iran!

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Grave in the Garden

Really good so far. Can't wait to read the rest!

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Bifrons Murders

This is a really good story! I can't wait to finish it!

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Fatal Alliances

I enjoyed the plot and would like to know what happens next! The story needs some editing, grammar and such.

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