H. K. Collins

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Good Concept

I like the concept behind the story. Taking everyday life experiences and turning them into a story takes effort. Doing so and keeping the readers attention takes even more. The story gives an interesting insight and feel of someone living everyday life, with the emotion clearly showing. Especially as the story grows longer. Some grammer and punctuation need work, but otherwise it's a nice story. Keep up the work in progress!

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Thrilling.

An easily enjoyable story, with a good plot, solid characters and strong premise. The only downside is the monotonous or rather average start as there seems to many ideas are in a chapter. But when one continues, it becomes more entertaining as other characters get involved! So a nod to the author for getting the plot moving swiftly, although some ideas could be considered separately. Above all, it was a great read and I can't wait to read more.

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Truly Enjoyable

Fell in love with all the characters! Great job describing them and their unique worlds, every single one of them are diffrent and your writing makes everything seem real. My only concern is that the story does take a little long to take off, so maybe reconsider some of the orders of presenting the worlds because this might help you benefit from the intriguing abilty of your novel. All in all, it was good, interesting, sweet, something different and most of all a true fantasy/sci-fi. Keep up the great work!

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Fun

I enjoyed the story a lot! I like the fact that there isn't over explanations everywhere so it makes one focus on the root of the story more. The story flows in an easy manner and keeps one guessing, which is a good thing. There are some finishing touches needed but overall it was fun to read. Great job!

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Satisfying

I truly liked the novel. It's both satisfying in the ending and also has an interesting aspect to it. There is also a great tie between the idea of the scarfs that seems unnecessary at first, but at the end it brings everything full-circle, which I enjoyed. My only advice would be to look at punctuation errors and maybe some more surrounding discriptions could be used to help the story to come to life.

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Good premises

The story from the start has a good setup and inviting qualities. Despite some grammer and punctuation problems, it has the means to be a good book when done.

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Good

Good and powerful lines. I'm usually not a big fan of poetry, but this is delivered on a simplistic, yet unique manner.

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Interesting

I don't usually read books like this, but I have to say I enjoyed it! It was interesting and kept me intrigued through every chapter, although I had to focus hard here and there to understand what was happening. Some more detail might be needed at times to clarify a few things, but other than that great work to the author. I big thumbs up from me.

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Intriguing.

This story brings about something that really gives you something to think about and wanting to know more, considering I finished it in one sitting. I admired the writing style and most of all being intrigued by every moment. My only problem was that some things seemed a little rushed and skipped over, some more explanation of what was really going on should be considered, because this leaves the story a little vague. Other than that, good work.

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