H. K. Collins

The Awakening

I love the uniqueness of the story and the characters that are easily outstanding. With all the love, however, I have to say that in a few chapters things do seem a little messy and some information does not seem needed at the exact moment, which creates a drag. But overall, honestly the story is worth the read.

Good Concept

I like the concept behind the story. Taking everyday life experiences and turning them into a story takes effort. Doing so and keeping the readers attention takes even more. The story gives an interesting insight and feel of someone living everyday life, with the emotion clearly showing. Especially as the story grows longer. Some grammer and punctuation need work, but otherwise it's a nice story. Keep up the work in progress!

Thrilling.

An easily enjoyable story, with a good plot, solid characters and strong premise. The only downside is the monotonous or rather average start as there seems to many ideas are in a chapter. But when one continues, it becomes more entertaining as other characters get involved! So a nod to the author for getting the plot moving swiftly, although some ideas could be considered separately. Above all, it was a great read and I can't wait to read more.

Fun

I enjoyed the story a lot! I like the fact that there isn't over explanations everywhere so it makes one focus on the root of the story more. The story flows in an easy manner and keeps one guessing, which is a good thing. There are some finishing touches needed but overall it was fun to read. Great job!

Entertaining

Greatly thought out story, with even better worldbuilding! The story flows well and it remains interesting throughout. Very entertaining read, good job.

Great

I love the idea and everything else about the story so far. My only advice would be to watch out for sentences that are too long, cause this sometimes creates a bit.of confusion. Other than that, great kob!

Good premises

The story from the start has a good setup and inviting qualities. Despite some grammer and punctuation problems, it has the means to be a good book when done.

Interesting

I don't usually read books like this, but I have to say I enjoyed it! It was interesting and kept me intrigued through every chapter, although I had to focus hard here and there to understand what was happening. Some more detail might be needed at times to clarify a few things, but other than that great work to the author. I big thumbs up from me.

Intriguing.

This story brings about something that really gives you something to think about and wanting to know more, considering I finished it in one sitting. I admired the writing style and most of all being intrigued by every moment. My only problem was that some things seemed a little rushed and skipped over, some more explanation of what was really going on should be considered, because this leaves the story a little vague. Other than that, good work.