hewnly

Just for fun.

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Lovely

Really easy to read, interesting story! A bit sad it's just a first part, now will have to wait for part 2 just when things are starting to get extra good!!

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Great 👍

What a good story full of twists and getting deep into reasoning behind behaviour of various sides of love. Enjoyed so much!

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Love it

Amazing book

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Enjoying so far!

Just finished Chapter 13 and I really enjoy reading it! Besides a few minor grammar etc mistakes it's well written, easy to read, plot so far is great and characters very interesting. Can't wait for more Chapters!

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hmm

I liked it, it touches on an interesting subject and the plot is quite interesting. However, I can't believe how many times the word 'enlighten' is used.... so overused to the point it can be a drinking game or something. I also found the lecturing and overexplaining quite a bit too much but I get where it's coming from.

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needs a lot of work

the writing style needs a lot of work, it's quite difficult to read, poorly structured sentences with random 'fancy' words thrown in that are not even making sense sometimes... gave up at chapter 4 or 5. It has ppotential but needs some heavy editing as it is now.

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Stunning

Amazing book

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Oh my god

I don't remember the last time a came across such an incredible story. So well written, deep characters, smart plot. I honestly have nothing to fault it

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loved it

great read, will be checking other stories from this author for sure!

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Loved it

Loved it

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wonderful

Enjoying the Dark series so much!!!

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Finished in one sitting

Great one

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Intense

Intense story, loved the first 12 chapters, can't wait for more!

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