No Ones Charm
It's an interesting concept, shapes are used to define a person, and who their match will be. Your characters are witty, and a few times I found myself laughing. I'm not quite finished with it. It gets a little slow and there are quite a few mistakes that I kept getting hung up on, which makes it hard to read at times. For the most part though the writing flows well, particularly with the dialog. Way to many exclamation points and bold drawn out words that are unnecessary particularly in the first chapter (Which I'm not gonna lie, it almost made me stop reading it) it gets a little excessive. I totally like the idea you have and you have a lot of potential, so keep writing and challenging yourself.
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