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"I choose the book because I love reading historical fiction and romance. I really love the way the story keeps you on the edge of your sit and when you think everything is going good there's another twist .I would love to read more books by Jennifer Crombleholme. "
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"I really enjoyed the book"
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"This is such a wonderfully written book, I'm so glad I decided to read it. I have been captured by the story and the characters for days now. It is incredibly well paced and each new twist and turn is well thought out. I'd give it an A++++++++++ if I could!"
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"I thought this was a good start but this needs some work. The plot is okay but I felt a bit bored at times. There is a lot of potential here but it does need going over. Unfortunately, there are a lot of errors which make it hard to read. Sadly, I couldn’t complete the book because of this. Grammar, punctuation and spelling need to be worked on. There are a lot of sentences that don’t need to be so long and can be stopped with a period. I would recommend reading your book out loud as it is easier to spot the mistakes. Try to focus on the flow and the pace. Also try to find new ways to describe the scene and the way someone speaks. It’s perfectly OK to say ‘he said’ or ‘she said’ sometimes. I found ‘he informed’ too grating when it’s used all the time. I thought your characters were slightly robotic and bland. Unfortunately I don’t have any feelings for them, not yet anyway. However, if this is the first book you have written then it is a good draft. So well done. It takes a lot of patience to write a book. It can take a person such a long time to get it perfect. But if you keep reviewing and editing until it is the best it can be - it could be a good book. I look forward to reading it again when its polished. All the best, Katie xx"