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Buch 2
"Das Buch hat mir sehr gefallen. Wollte den zweiten teil lesen aber den gibt's nur auf Englisch. Kommt noch eine in Deutsch?"
Well done
"Very well written and loving the storyline. Strong female main character with a nice growth during the book. Would have liked more developed side characters, like Sydney, Marina and Faye, but that might be done in book 2. There are a few small typos but those can be easily fixed. Overal, nicely done and keep writing! ❤️"
The City of Hellius
"Wow!!️!!️!!️ Dpannende Geschichte um Natascha's Leben. Kampf um Macht und Liebe. Hoffe Natascha findet ihr Glüvk im 2. Teil Bin gespannt"
Wow Amazing
"I cannot say enough about this book. It is phenomenal. Great writing. This is probably my favorite book on here so far. You bring everything to life, all the character, the back round, even the forest and trees, the lakes and water areas. A person can feel like they are there part of this story. The plot is fantastic also. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read part 2."
Love iT
"Wow, really love this story, finished with chapter 8, and just want to read more and more. "
The City of Hellius
"This is a good story but like I dislike a cliffhanger at the end of the season I'm not liking this one, it's like this poor girl never gets a break at any point. Where are all her warriors by the way?"
The City of Hellius
"This is a charming story. Loads of twists, with a Little bit of humor to keep you entertained. The mystery is intriguing and keeps you guessing."
The city of hellius
"I enjoyed this book "
Kept me hooked
"This book kept me going, I can't wait for the next one."
Strong Women Characters
"This is more of a coming-of-age and finding yourself than a love story. Yes, there is love and lust, but not the main story line. Strong characters built for next book. Definitely a spin on new powers. Looking forward to the next book."
City of Hellius
"Awesome! Ready for more 😊"
Great story
"The story is fantastic for world building, plot, character development, etc. The writing style is a bit clumsy at times, with a lot of poorly placed punctuation undermining the flow of the text."
The city of Hellius
"Such an amazing story, I loved all the characters from the very beginning.... I can't wait to read the next book in the Sequel To the Author , I thank you for writing such beautiful and amazing story"
The City of Hellius
"Very interesting read! I love it, the complexity of the story added the thrill of the whole story, there is so much to it. I like how you build up each character and enter mingle to one another. Natasha ended is powerful. I can't wait for the next series, very well done author 👍👌 thank you😘"
Can't wait for second book
"The author did a fantastic job laying out the characters. The past is just as intriguing as present. I'm honestly excited about the next book. There are so many possibilities "
The City Of Hellius
"A beautifully intricate written piece that hooks you quickly and has you needing to finish the book immediately!! The author is truly gifted in storytelling! Give it a go! "
Amazing! Addictive
"Omg. I NEED this book in my library. This is amazing. The story line pulled me in. The descriptions a beautifully thought out. I wouldn’t change a thing. "
Loved the storyline
"This was absolutely a page turner. I can not wait to see where the story goes in the next book. Great job!"
Yaneth
"Great story. Cannot wait for the sequel.👏👏👏"
Drawing me like a moth to the flame
"Okay first of all great story. I usually stop around the 15 chapter mark to write my review and read on if I enjoy the story. Your story pulled me in so I couldn't stop and needed to read on. You characters are well written with great depth and the plot is compelling and suspenseful. I loved that the main character was raised by a gay couple. In general there are a few points I would like to note down. Firstly Natasha doesn't get even an ounce of rest in the entire book. The plot is very fast paced which isn't a problem because everything is well written. But she is hit with one betrayal after another and there another secret, then a misunderstanding and a danger. It would be nice if she could take a breath once in a while like the blissful happy calm before another storm. There were also a few parts where it felt like you purposely pushed the plot forward. On another note there I would have loved to see Amber in her day to day. You said she had a hand in the planning of the party and worked for the vampire who organised such things. It would have been nice to read that as well. In my personal sight was the start rather predictable. Like how she had a werewolf and some other parts as well. Many other things at least to me where very obvious which usually would be a reason for me to set a story aside as I don't like if I know basically how the entire story will be going and can make a checklist and just check the boxes. But as said that is my personal preference. Overall I can say it's a story I would enjoy continuing reading further. Keep writing like this, this is a great story "
