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Bruised egos
"Quite emotional and it leaves you feeling bittersweet."
Great story
"A very emotional and heartfelt story thank you. I enjoyed the ups and downs of each character and would recommend this book to the masses, it should appeal to many reader who enjoys romance. "
Well Worth Reading
"Very touching story. Funny, sad and heartbreaking. It leaves you hoping for a different outcome, while at the same time understanding that it would likely end no differently."
Bruised Egos
"I enjoyed it from start to finish! I can't even believe I'm at the end. Would love to have a sequel. I highly recommend this brilliantly written book! 👍👍"
What a Book!
"This book took me on a roller coaster ride of emotions. I am so inlove with my main characters. Felt a bit disappointed close to the end but I have renewed faith that in book 2 all my fears will go away. I anxiously await book 2 "
Team Alex from day one
"I’m so glad I happened upon this book. I fell for Alex from Sarah’s very first encounter with him - I was hooked. The “bad boy” who is so much more, verses the billionaire willing to sacrifice control…. how does one choose? I should also note: everyone needs a Marissa in their life. Book 2, please let me know my investment in Alex was for more than just tears. Thanks for the ride!"
Amezing
"I love it!! I apsolutely want a second book!!!! Amezing! "
Bruised egos
"Easily one of the best books I’ve read in a while hoping and praying for a book 2 "
Bruised Egos
"This was a really spicy romance novel. Chemistry was smoking.Even the ending was spicy."
Bruised Egos
"This was a really spicy romance novel. Chemistry was smoking.Even the ending was spicy."
Wonderful
"The love the loss the grief the commitment it was beautifully written. I absolutely loved it. It got better with each chapter. I don’t think I would mind a follow up at all."
Both hot and heartbreaking - I was addicted
"This story wound up being far more emotional than I ever would have expected. It started as hot, messy, complicated and funny. I wish that I had a friend like Marissa! Then it turned so emotional that I had tears running down several times. I went back and forth so many times about what I hoped would happen, and what I thought about what did happen. Until the last couple of chapters, I had some sort of acceptance of how things had gone. But then the last couple of chapters blew that out of the water! I'm both hoping for and afraid of a sequel. LOL Really I'm nervous about what could happen and what it could mean for everyone involved. I don't want to spoil the twists and turns for anyone, but it really does give a bit of everything. "
Make sure to have ice
"This story is both steamy and heartbreaking. I hope there’s more to come!"
writing skills
"This chapter really stood out the storytelling was gripping and the characters were portrayed with such depth"
Hot and romantic
"It brings me both to tears just thinking about the outcome of the story. I like them both for her but she needs to choose sonky one"
Bruised
"Definitely was a good read and I would love to read more afterwards cuz there is soo much I I didn't quite expect."
Book 2 Please.Brilliant plot. Writing style to improve
"The plot is great. I can't wait for book 2. Here's some harsh constructive criticism, please take in good faith: If the author intended the novel to read like a 500+ page poem, then they succeeded. This poetry-based writing style instead of prose-basee takes away from everything. Words and phrases positioned as full sentences and a serious overuse of similes and metaphors makes this a very different read. A book/novel consists of full narratives, complete sentences and a steady flow. The current writing style makes it almost impossible to see character development or hold on long enough to follow methodological progress. Dialogue needs a lot of work - no one talks like they're in a court room 24/7 - no less entire characters in a storyline. A very limited use of theatrics and figures of speech woven into narrative and descriptive writing would have been perfect. The current writing style would be perfect for a poem or if the author intends to present this as a poem. The plot is however so good that it keeps you reading despite these flaws. This makes it a potential best-seller if the author adjust the written style. I'm sure AI can help"
