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Bev
"A very different storyline take from other werewolf stories"
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Absolutely Addictive – I Need the Next Chapter NOW!
"OMG this story has me HOOKED!! Selena is such a badass but I love how raw and real she feels, and Vexa?? BEST wolf voice ever, she’s hilarious and terrifying at the same time. 👏👏 The tension with Lucian, the danger with Kaelthas, and now Prince Aerion showing up?? I’m living for this drama!! Every chapter ends on a cliffhanger and I’m screaming at my screen for the next one. Seriously, the writing is so sharp and addictive—I can SEE every scene like a movie. I need Chapter 11 ASAP!! 😭🔥"
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- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
8 चैप्टर पढ़े
Rejected by the Alpha, Claimed by the Billionaire
"The plot is enthralling, it grips the reader from the prolog and has us wondering what will happen next. The characters are well written to the point where I have a severe dislike of Lila already. The pacing of the story and emotions it evokes makes me as a reader feel like the rejection is happening to me not a character in a book. I hope that during the course of the book we see out MFC learn how to stand up for herself and show her strength, be it physical or of spirit. Lastly, I want to congratulate the Author for her bravery in writing a book and bringing her idea to paper for us readers to enjoy. I have a good feeling about this book and am interested to see if it becomes a series or a stand alone, but I can wait. Well done Melanie Botha"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
20 चैप्टर पढ़े
Crisis of identity.
"This started out well, followed some basic guidelines for a shifter tale, and then it seemed to not know what it was. It was supposed to be a rejected mate book where the female lead escaped her old pack and found a future with a billionaire. For the first part of the book that followed the path, then it got strange. The old pack leader wanted her back, but not for the usual reasons. It got heavy with magic and mysticism for a reason I never quite understood. The female lead grows stronger in her new situation, comes to feelings for the billionaire but there's a hidden understory in the pages that is never fully explained. You just have to take it on faith. I will admit I started speed reading chapters once it got weird, just enough to understand the story but not getting bogged down in the underlying morass. The kidnap scene shows up as expected, these stories always have one...seems you cannot finish the tale until the heroine is put in a cell and tortured at some point and this one doesn't disappoint. She endures for a period of time and then escapes, because she has to...these stories also have this element at some point. Then the weird ratchets up. They defeat the bad element and move back to the city. Had the story ended there I would have better feelings about it but no, we have to reveal that the bad element may have survived and will need to be fought again. Because why end on a happy note? I would class this story as one that didn't know what it was and tried too hard to put 300 pounds of stuff into a suitcase meant to hold 200 pounds. In this case, less was more. Less uncertainty, less magical and digital mayhem, more work on the characters themselves. We get introduced to them, they grow a bit and then the reader has to take the rest on faith. To put it into context, we started watching the Matrix and ended up in Dark City. Both follow similar styles but they are very different films. To the author, I love shifter tales and I've read a ton of them. I could never get comfortable in this tale, I never knew what it was at its core, the characters didn't seem to know who they were either...in my opinion. It made it tough to root for them. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
30 चैप्टर पढ़े
Interesting Concept
"I really like the concept of this story, the hybrid werewolf and fae main heroine in a love story between two different werewolves. I really wanted to like this story more, but it seemed to repeat the same parts from chapter to chapter, and I got confused about what was happening. Additionally, the timeline didn't align well; it would speed up and slow down, then repeat. I didn't really understand where the timeline worked, really. The concept, great. Getting it to flow needs some work. Grammar, so-so. Plot holes are often present since the story seems to repeat itself, and chapters sometimes seem to be the same, so this could be shorter. This could really use an edit to become a better story, and the ending comes out of nowhere. Perhaps I'm missing something, as some of these chapters are a bit confusing, and I feel I've missed something due to the repetition. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
32 चैप्टर पढ़े
Confused
"I believe you could have a great book with some proper editing. Though I understood the plot, somewhat, it needs more development. There needs to be a timeline, as it seemed like she was only training in the fea world for a day. I also thought that the barrier was put up by the Blackthorne and was only up a few days, apparently by the time it was being assaulted it had been months? Remove the repetitive paragraphs and chapters and use more adjectives.. the constant smells like ozone was a bit much."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
31 चैप्टर पढ़े
To much repetitive writing
"This was way longer than it needed to be. To much repetitive context. Plot was ok but very boring. I skipped a lot of paragraphs. Their relationship wasn’t explored enough."
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Repeats
"The story has so much repetition and is hard to follow along. I couldn’t finish the story."
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Rejected by the Alpha, Claimed by the Billionaire
"Plot holes and repetitive. 90% of the book is the repetitive fight scenes that do not mesh into the story of "romance". The ending was abrupt and did not have conclusions of how the fights results was, nothing about development of their romance. One of the worst stories I have come across. Don't be fooled by the alluring title of this book. Not worth the time spent on reading it."
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- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
11 चैप्टर पढ़े
Repeatitive
"All these chapters saying the same thing, over and over and over……and then no ending….so much potential for a story but no character or plot development. Lucien says the same exact sentence over and over, appears to have no brain or emotions."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?