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आपकी क्या राय है?
Never again Alpha
"Gripping story - want to know what happens now!"
The idea of this story is great
"I wanted to enjoy this story, I really really tried to read each painful chapter. Perhaps with some editing and talking with someone who has gone through what the female protagonist faced, it could flow into a good story. Lots of fluff that just filled chapters, silly arguments that solved nothing. I encourage this author to continue to hone your skills, potential is there. "
