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carolin

81 चैप्टर पढ़े

२१ मार्च २०२६

Very interesting story

"As most of the other reviews state lots of repeat chapters. I assume they are different POV but it is not stated perhaps it can be corrected through editing. The plot is good. However there feel is as if lots of missing chapters. We go from rejecting to war. There is no connection of our protagonist and her bloodline just that it is. No plot to our alpha king and the Queen relationship it just formed no explanation. Most of the story builds this way with most of the story line missing. Reads as plot points no connection between. I read everything enjoying the plot. It is exciting to read the end of twisted evil and peace returned. Well worth the read. "

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

JLW

80 चैप्टर पढ़े

२० मार्च २०२६

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Wow to go from be rejected to being the silver queen... this story non stop fighting/ war... "

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

marionmall

83 चैप्टर पढ़े

१६ मार्च २०२६

Great story

"I enjoyed book. Kept my interest from start to finish."

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

Viviana Lorena

65 चैप्टर पढ़े

३० मई २०२६

Enigmatica

"Me gusta como desarrolla las batallas. Pero fue muy pronto desde el momento que se descubre la loba de plata. Si lo recomendaria a los que le gusta este tipo de historia"

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

D.L. JAE

1 चैप्टर पढ़े

१६ मार्च २०२६

Promising Concept with Room for More Emotional Depth

"This story has a really interesting premise and a lot of potential. The overall idea behind the plot is intriguing and I could see where the author was going with it. It has a lot of chapters but I DNF. The reason is not because it was a bad story, it was because... The writing style felt a bit distant for me as a reader. The narration often came across very technical or straightforward, which made it harder to fully connect with the characters and their emotions. At the start of the story, I found myself wishing for more distinct personalities and deeper emotional moments. She was rejected and she felt nothing it seems and neither did I. When a story allows readers to really feel what the characters are experiencing, it can make the world come alive even more--my opinion. That said, the concept is strong and with a bit more emotional depth and character development to reel us (readers) in, this can be a very engaging story."

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

lehmanbernd

65 चैप्टर पढ़े

१ नव. २०२६

Xyz

"Zuviel Wiederholungen gerade an jedem Ende der Kapitel"

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

user-a02Gp42Q12

81 चैप्टर पढ़े

२७ सित. २०२६

Intéressant

"Le livre est intéressant mais le problème c'est qu'il y a des chapitres qui se répètent et du coup on perd un peu l'intérêt du livre"

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

canderson3406

68 चैप्टर पढ़े

१७ अप्रै. २०२६

Rejected by my alpha, claimed by the alpha king

"It started out great! I was so excited to read more. I’m not sure how the main character went from getting to the castle , to now fighting for the vale! Then it started repeating itself... Each monster that came out just did the same exact thing as the last. Over and over! The only thing I enjoyed for the last 50 chapters was the comic relief of the king’s sister! I finished the book hoping that it would get better, it got worse! I don’t recommend this book to anyone! "

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

Kat

35 चैप्टर पढ़े

२४ अक्टू. २०२६

Needs a strong editor

"The plot, the idea of the plot is strong. But how does a nobody, just found her wolf, just found out she's a Queen that no one really believed existed, already know how to control everything? How is she winning every battle? No doubt. No exhaustion. Not even a moment of practice or quick review of ancient text that gives her a hint...? "

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

Natasha Davis

12 चैप्टर पढ़े

३० मई २०२६

Several missing chapters as well as repeated ones

"I will confirm what others have also stated. This book started out great, but there are several large gaps in the story that don’t make sense without context. Along with missing chapters, there are many others that repeat themselves making it difficult to continue reading. I suggest the author go through and correct these errors."

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

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