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Lang aber toll
"Echt tolle Geschichte serh sehr lang..manchmal langatmig aber wundervoll.. was mir gefehlt hat und erst am ende kam, waren die zärtlichkeiten..aber trtotzdem echt wunderschön"
Great story well told
"Great story. Cant wait for the next chapter"
particularly
"what on earth has the word "particularly " ever done to you? or, did you make a bet with someone how many times you can place it?? story is ok, too many repetitions and unfinished situations, unfortunately. keep going ;) "
