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The Alpha Bought the Wrong Bride

"I really feel like the writing style is superior and the story is extremely compelling. It fits into the alpha genre, but feels more sophisticated than the typical genre story. The story is suspenseful and currently I am stuck at what appears to be a cliffhanger. I can only hope that additions to the story will continue and this is not supposed to be the end because it definitely feels incomplete at this stopping point. "

कुल रेटिंग
कहानी
लेखन शैली
व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न

क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

amixima86

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८ अक्टू. २०२६

La novia equivocada del alfa

"Me ha enganchado y encantado, mucho suspense e intriga, fuera de lo comun"

कुल रेटिंग
कहानी
लेखन शैली
व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न

क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

West107

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१ अक्टू. २०२६

Disappointing ending!

"Disappointing ending is an understatement! I feel like I've wasted the last few days being invested in this story for an ending like this. If this had been a movie, it would have felt like the producers ran out of money and ended it. You pulled a 2 line character out and gave the story a 2 line ending. The book doesn't require a second story. It only requires a few more chapters to finish the story properly. It feels like you got bored and just quit 😐. "