आपकी क्या राय है?
Muito bom
"Até que enfim arranjamos uma garota pro nosso Syd!"
Fated to you
"I would like to start off saying that I love Sydney!!! He is absolutely my favorite character in every book so far (haven’t read the next ones yet, I hope his personality and chaos doesn’t change). This book series has me hooked. However, there are some things over all that need to be improved. For example: *Continuity: The ages of the kids don’t progress with the time lapse... like if Elijah is a year and a half older than Luna who is 5 and a half then he should be 7 not 5 as well. Or like for the truck incident when he called Axle. Axel said five minutes, and a few minutes later they hear the bikes... but suddenly the ambulance is taking care of them and the police are there talking to witnesses when Axle and everyone arrives. Where did the first responders come from? Things like this happen in various different ways dealing time, people, locations. Quire a few inconsistencies. *Conversation flow: Sometimes there are inconsistencies in conversations or dialogues. Like when someone references something that they shouldn’t have knowledge of yet and wouldn’t have a way of knowing. Like when Natasha is thinking about Sydney and listing things she likes about him and what he’s said or done; but he’s not told her he’s done this yet or it’s currently happening. We know that because a little later he comes back to her and they have a conversation about said thing and he tells her then or that particular detail isn’t mentioned. Or when they are having a conversation and the responses are before the questions like the paragraphs were flipped or something. Also, keeping with who said what when it’s a group of people talking. Sometimes there is the persons name in front of there dialogue but most of the time its ..... there. Especially in this book. It’s been an issues before in other books but not as bad as this one. Grammar: I try so hard over look small grammar issues , because hey.. we all have them. But sometimes it’s really hard to overlook sooo many. It seems like every chapter has several instances where multiple... MULTIPLE words are slammed together. For example, wordswillbewrittenlike this. Which begs the question, Do you have an editor or a person to proofread everything in order to help you? I mean even if it’s a friend or family member, or someone you can trust to give honest feedback and help? A lot if the issues with is novel or any of the others would be easily solved with someone reading and checking it. It definitely would improve so much. And yes it has to be another person because your brain knows what it’s supposed to say and will correct it and so you will see it as it should be instead of how it is. Finally, (sighs heavily) What the heck was this ending....... Was there a deadline or something going on because I was expecting like one more chapter but no, he sets up a meet and BAM the end..... like I had to read the end 4 times to make sure I didn’t miss something. We’ve had endings that have made me laugh, cry, or go take a cold shower. But this one.... Got my blood pressure up. He’s my fave character and he got the worst ending. Also........ the last step of the revenge plot.... This as$#@les death?!?!?!?!? What happened, where is it? I have no closure! 🤬😡😭😭😭 Even with the aforementioned things bravo👏!!! I love the series and your amazing imagination. You’re doing a great job keep up the great work. I know each book focuses on each individual member of the SOA, however, how about keeping the series going with new books just about them and their growth as a family and group. More exploits, adventures and villains to destroy. I’m way too invested in them to want this to end, lol Spicy or not I need more!!! Hope this helps, keep up the great work! By the way I should mention, I am a new fan I randomly stumbled upon this series when I read hound and Tara’s book. I loved it and had to go back to find the others, I was shocked and elated. I haven’t ever read spicy books before, I’m more a suspense and thriller (non-spicy) books. And an add for that book got me here and now I’m addicted and broken and think I like it. Meanwhile, I have a paperback thriller sitting on my side table collecting dust because I’m falling in love with the Sons of Ash! 🤣😏🤤🤤 ~Minx "
Belle vengeance
"Alors là histoire très intéressante et vengeance"
I’m 😭 in 🥲 love 🥹with this book
"Dear Lord!!!! I’m not sure how someone got as talented as you but I’m not complaining.Sydney is truly such a thought out and well written character. His past made my heart hurt for him but also happy it was in the past. Tank the other big guy hiding all his emotions clearly take a brother role and it was so sweet to watch. However in a part his calls the old ladies of the club his mothers I think tank was the closest thing he had to a father figure. I also think watching him have kids helped Sydney be a good :))) I could go on for hours about him and this amazing love story "
Fated to you S. O. A
"Loved it, Another goody, keep it up lm catching up to you last time l looked a your wall. lol. Off there now see what’s goody’s you put there. Amazing as always 👍👌🏻👏👏👏👏🌹"
The Child Saviour
"I enjoy these books and this series. There are so many included stories. The author views life in many different ways and I’m enjoying the reading."
J adore cette série
"J adore chaque livres de cette série ! Bien écrit, belle histoire à chaque fois, mêlant suspense, humour et spicy stuff....et un continu des couples précédents. Bravo a l auteur.... continuez a écrire svp !! 🙏🙏😉😊"
I need to review all of them
"I love the sons of ash stories. I was so excited to find out more were written! I will go reviews the others. Such a great story as long as you don’t mind a little repetition with the dialogue. I’m devouring the series. "
Whaou!!!
"Encore une pépite!!! Quel talent!!! J'ai adoré ce 6eme tome des Sons of ash je me suis regalée l intrigue impeccable beaucoup d amour d humour et de action ça peut paraître cucul comme comment mais je n'ai pas d autres mots je suis encore entrain de me remettre de cette superbe histoire Venez lire cette série vous me comprendrez! Un grand bravo à l auteure et un énorme merci!!!"
Fated to you
"Ok, I know I said the last book was my favorite but I absolutely LOVE Sydney. His story was exceptional and you did an amazing job telling it. I have grown to love his character and I honestly would love to see more... after all the characters are finished... on the next generation of the family. He wasn't just the funny brother but he became so much more in this book. I love heart that he has. Wonderful wonderful job. "
Fated to you
"Loved, loved this story! Your characters are the best!"
Amazing storytelling 💜
"Miss Siren 💜 another jaw dropping, foofi clutching, gorgeous show of your beautiful craft of the written word. Your characters are all amazing in their unique ways and they come vividly to life within the imagination. Your ability to keep a reader so engrossed that the world around one disappears. Your use of nuances, humour, angst, timed to perfection. From Ash we Rise is testament to all your characters within this series and I love the motto, all the stories are brilliant and I wait with anticipation for the rest of the brothers, their significant others and all within to be brought to life in my imagination. Thank you for sharing your craft with us,💜🥰😘🥰💜"
LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS SERIES!
"I think Sydney stole my heart 🥹 the whole series is amazing, spicy, dramatic, humorous with powerful women & emotionally constipated men 😭 FROM ASHES, WE RISE! can’t wait for Raze’s and prolly Doc’s & Knuckle’s old ladies to join the family 🥺 "
Another amazing 📚
"Another great book full of love ,laughter and chaos. I can't wait for the next story !!"
sweet and caring
"Wow, Sydney is a surprise. His depth is endless. He is sweet, caring, brave and outspoken. The extremely intelligent and cute kids elevate the story to the next level. Natasha is a badass as other old ladies, she is strong, brave and beautiful. A great story with a lot of emotions, chosen family love and unexpected kindness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"
I ❤️ it
"Sehr schöne Geschichte. Ich mag deine Art zu schreiben, Dinge ins Detail zu erzählen, deine starken und trotzdem weichen Charaktere. Ich lese deine Geschichten lieber auf Englisch als in meiner Muttersprache, auch wenn definitiv ein paar Wörter dabei sind, die ich nachschauen muss, weil sie im Schulunterricht nicht gelehrt werden 😉. Danke auch für diese Story. Ich hoffe, ich verkümmert noch viel von dir zu lesen! "
Amazing
"That was a great journey. I neeeeeeddddd mooore! Lol love this series and this crazy family. I can’t wait to see where this goes next because at this point in part of the family"
Fated to You
"Once again no words, #theatricalsiren takes you on journeys that is just brilliant ❤️ "
Another GREAT book!
"This was fantastic! I absolutely loved the salon scene! Made me cry, I read it 2 times!"
Read 5 Chapters and I am hooked
"I just started I just have to say the yearning is just sizzling the way he thinks about her and touches himself the way he sees her everywhere is so beautiful"
