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Rejected by the Alpha Claimed by the Dragon Lor

"Honestly started really good, then it was really confusing, was the Dragon Lord her father? And than he proposed to her? The twin ? "

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
Lyra

"Me encantó!! Una trama fuera de lo común! Felicidades a la autora!"

  • कुल रेटिंग
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Interesting origin story

"This story clips along very fast. You will not get all the background information so the story feels rushed. I enjoyed the read and the ending, not all happy but an ending that brings the complexity of consequences "

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  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
Unique

"I love the story line its very captivating...kudos"

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
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Exciting story

"I love the way the author tells a story. It's riveting & keeps upon on edge. Patiently waiting to see what happens next!"

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  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
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Enthralling!

"I love this story!"

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
Nicely written but confusing

"*spoilers* The book is well written with some nice twists if a little predictable, however some parts are really confusing or not addressed after being mentioned. In the chapter before the Epilogue the Dragon Lord says to Aurelia "I should have saved you" and she says "you couldn't" then he says "I should have found our child" and she says "you did" and they both look at Lyra but them in the Epilogue he proposes to Lyra???? Also what was the deal with the twins? Did Varos kill one? Why does Aurelia's spirit/memory thing not mention a second baby? "

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