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Loved it 🤩
"I liked the story alot and it was written well but there were a little part of the dialogue towards the end where it became slightly harder to tell who was talking but other than that I loved the story."
mine
"very nice story but sad"
The Game Of Desire
"This was a good story ❤️❤️💕💕"
Captivating
"This story is very good so far. To the point where it's page-turning, I've got about five books I'm meant to be reviewing, but I kept on telling myself just one more chapter. Quite a lot of erotica, has literally no plot whatsoever, it's just constant sex. There is a plot here, and deep down, who can resist a good old love triangle? A few points, the first section is set in America, but until they went to LA airport, I thought it was set in India, you should probably make that more clear to your readers. Point number two, sometimes you write, that Kiara and her friends talked for a while. What would really be useful to get to know the characters, especially when you're first meeting the characters is if you actually include the dialogue. Keep up the great work, Sofia"
Some twists I wasn’t expecting!
"This book has a captivating story line, but needs a bit a of clean up. There is punctuation missing as well as a few spelling errors. Overall, an enjoyable read. "
