Sofia Corsi

Hi, my names Sofia. I am 21 and am autistic. For some reason, I prefer old music, the 1950s-80s so I tend to use them in my works.

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Refreshing change

I don't usually read poetry, but this was very good.
It was only a few lines, but the author managed to put so much soul and emotion into those few lines.
A little can sometimes say a lot, and that is clear here.
Keep up the good work!

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Good Start

I read the first few chapters, and it had a very good start, lots of exciting cliffhangers. The author also had a really good way of conveying the characters feelings, I could completely understand Henry's frustration at his parents.

I somehow feel though that in a way the author gives room much information in the first few chapters. It includes a lot of flashbacks, and at one point a flashback within a flashback so it's slightly confusing for the reader to keep track of Henry's relationships.

There is also the problem of the author's vocabulary choices. Sometimes the vocab they use are too formal and sophisticated, twenty-year-old students don't talk like that no matter how rich they are. And sometimes the word choice is grammatically incorrect.

This can, however, all be fixed with editing, the most important thing when starting a story is a plot. If you have a good plot, then everything is just polishing and can come later. Keep up the good work.

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Totes Cool!

I've read the first few chapters, and it seems really imaginative and well thought through.

The author has a really good way of writing about teenagers. The way they talk and think, the slang.

I also. love how with the sickness in this book, it starts showing up slowly just on the nails which is really good.

I also like with the Griffins, how they like to pick their riders by personality, I think that's a really good idea.

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I would buy this book!

This book was amazing! I loved it. I couldn't put it down, it was a fairly long book but I read it in twenty-four hours.

It was page-turning and made me want to find out what happened in the next chapter. It was full of all sorts of twists and turns and had quite a few good cliffhangers.

If this book was published I would definitely but it!

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Very Good

I like what you've done here. You've got a good start. The characters seem to jump off the page and the descriptions are really good.

The bit that was really good for me, was the flashback scene when Aria cut her hair, I could almost see it happening in real life and I could fell Lorelai's shame and anger.

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Great Start!

I read the first three chapter and it was really interesting!

There was a lot of world-building and the characters are really well developed.

The only advice I have is that the first chapter is slightly confusing. There is too much description at some points. Also, the characters for the majority of the first chapter are referred to as him or her. If you use their names, it could be less confusing for the reader.

Keep up the good work!

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Amusing

I read the first couple of chapters, and it was very funny. I loved the part where she thought there were ghosts when it was actually just people doing it.

The dialogue of the young students is spot on, some people have university students talk to sophisticated, which whilst they're talking amongst themselves they don't usually do.

Well done, keep up the good work!

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Refreshingly Different

I read the first three chapters of The Trident, and it was very good.
Every single book I read for review swaps is completely different which makes it exciting for me to experience new genres of writing.
But this was really good, the characters the details the plot, it's like it's been lifted straight out of an old movie. I can actually hear the main character speaking his monologues in his head like he would be in the film.
The only slight problem I have is paragraph length. A lot of the paragraphs, particularly on the descriptions are very long, and this can make it slightly difficult to read.

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Really intresting

I read the first four chapters, and it was really exciting, lots of mystery and intrigue.

I really liked how strong and empowered the female characters were which is always a good thing.

The grammar and vocab were really good, and the world and characters were really imaginative and developed. Keep up the good work!

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A Perfect Recipe

This was amazing!

All the characters are really good. Salem is trying so hard to hide her dark powers, but they keep on trying to spill out which I love. Leo though, he is brilliant, so caring and kind, and understanding, just what she needs.

I also love that, in this book the author is really good at portraying anxiety. The heroine is worrying about things in earlier chapters but in a realistic and relatable way. I have high levels of anxiety myself, so I know whats it's like and the authors' portrayal was spot on!

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Good opening

The first chapter was really good. Lots of suspense and scary. I don't usually read horror, but I can understand its appeal to some people.

It was very well-paced, and you did a good job of introducing the main character and setting up the story. There was enough background for the heroine's motives to be understandable, without me feeling too overwhelmed with information.

You were amazing at depicting her emotions. For example, I could really feel your heroines rage when she was talking to the lady over the phone

The grammar was good, and the vocab was well used.

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Great start!

This was a really good start to a story.

The sibling dynamics between Melody and her two older brothers in amazing. You can tell there's a lot of love there.

It would be interesting to see where the story goes from there!

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Very exciting

Very exciting, and the world is very developed.

I liked all the characters, and whilst the author does use swearing at some points, it is not overly used so that it is annoying.

I would love to know what happens next in the story.

The only criticism I may have is the constant point of view changes, there isnt really any indication of when it's going to change, so that might be confusing for the reader.

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Really good

Considering that English isn't your first language this is really good!

The plot is gripping. I'm don't usually read Mafia romance but I can see why this might appeal to some people. The characters are very well developed, and there are lots of good cliffhangers.

The grammar and punctuation could use a bit of work but that's all editing so that can be fixed. Also occasionally you use the wrong word for something, the one that jumps to mind is 'browny'. A browny in English is usually used as a term for someone with dark skin, a brownie on the other hand is a type of chocolate cake.

Keep up the good work, you're a really good writer, Sofia

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