A fantastic start, looking forward to where it's going next!
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Angel really does have a life from Hell and has done literally nothing to deserve it. Sexual assault, beating, child neglect, the list goes on.
A few points, you sometimes jump between times, present to future, back to present and then back to future. I know that you're trying to throw some mystery into the book, but the way you're writing it at the moment leaves the readers completely confused. There are two options here, you could leave clues in the present sections, or make the future sections less intense and confusing.
Also, you've decided to censor your own swearing, if you want to do that, that's fine, but it is not necessary.
You've got a really good start, keep up the good work, Sofia