hinakhan56

Unique

The story has a unique plotline. You don't see this kind of things very often. Your writing style is amazing and I think you do have a chance to win the contest. Good luck!

Well described! And have an amazing plot.

Your way of describing is very good. You can literally imagine the scenes in your head. The plot is something different and very interesting.

Interesting plotline

Okay, so the plotline is very unique and amazing. But the writing style is a bit confusing. You need to put commas when you're writing a dialogue otherwise it's getting very confusing. Secondly, if you are writing dialogue and telling the feeling or the way of the speaker it should be a separate paragraph. There are some grammatical errors here and there. You can add a lot more and as a writer, you need the reader to be interested in the book by leaving the chapter on a cliffhanger so that the reader could make assumptions that what would happen next.

Interesting

I really liked it. Your intro was so interesting and it captures the interest of the reader. Keep up!

Amazing

This book is very awesome. The prologue had really captured my interest and I would love to read more. I am a fan of mysteries and yours was just awesome

Loved it

I want to know more. Your writing style was awesome. Your plot is amazing and very unique. Keep up the good work!

Thriller, adventure

I want to know more, how will he save his girlfriend? Oooh this is getting exciting.

Loved it

I really like this book. Your prologue was so captivating. Your writing style really intrigued me. Keep up the good work.

amazing

I feel really bad for the twins. i hope they have a happy ending together. although the book is very interesting.i will love to read more.

Roses and thorns

Your cover page is so eye-catching and your intro is so intriguing. Your novel is really interesting. I will love to read more. A little tip that when you write about the nightmares use italic format it will look more good(it's just my opinion). Your plot is also very interesting so good luck.

The Assassin's beast

I really like it to be honest.Your way of writing is so mysterious and intriguing.I would love to read more so please update soon.Your characters,your plot everything is so interesting that keeps me on my toes.You are made for this so best of luck👍👍

Intriguing

I like it. The plot is amazing and the book has a mysterious effect. I love how Ximena is bubbly yet feisty. Your way of writing is amazing and I wish to read more.

Emotional

I've only read 4 chapters so far but I can tell this is going to be one hell of a ride. Normally this is not my type of books as it's very emotional and I dont deal well with sad situations, heck I even cry on happy endings. But the writing style was very nice, maybe you should try to make it more intriguing coz I know your book is amazing and it will make it more interesting. There were grammar errors but I do more than that😂so it's okay. It's natural.

Im gonna talk about the characters, I loved the sibling bond. You explained the personalities of everyone quite well.

The cover page was also very good. I appreciate the effort you're putting in this book. Keep up!!

Interesting

I liked the book. The plot is very interesting. The writing style is soo good. The characters everything is amazing. Keep up!!!

Romance

Ok, the story looks quite interesting. The plot seems intriguing but one thing I noticed the flow of the story seems a bit choppy. A few dialogues appear a bit forced but other than that I think the descriptions are very good. The book will turn out to be amazing im sure as I haven't read much. One thing, the book is very slow-paced for my taste but I think some people like it. I'll also appreciate the cover page coz it's very cute. Keep up the good work!!!

A good start

I liked the start but I think you need to know some writing techniques I think. You are reusing some words or phrases which affect the flow of the story. I liked the plotline though. It's very interesting and intriguing. I'll like to read more. You just need to enhance your writing a bit. You got talent but with a little effort, I think your book will be a hit👍🏼💜. I love these kinds of stories. And one more thing be a bit more descriptive it will help to create an image in readers mind( PS: you added a lot but it was advice for future)

Wow!

Your way of writing was just wow. The plot was very good and interesting. I loved the characters. Keep up!

Loved it

Something new and unique and will keep you on the edge👍🏼. Loved their chemistry. Way of writing was just wow. keep up!!

Amazing!!!

I loved your writing style. The concept is something new and unique. I love your descriptions. Will continue to read it. Good luck!

Good start

I loved the start. The characters are amazing although you can add a bit more descriptions. You are very talented. Keep up!

Amazing

The story is very interesting and I had a great time reading it. Keep up!

These glass walls

Really liked it. The characters are well described. You are quite talented. I would love to read more keep up!

Loved it

I have read your book but didn't get the time to review it. Your way of describing was awesome. I loved this romance book of yours. Minor spelling mistakes but overall good job.

Suspence

I really liked it. The first chapter really intrigued me. This story has suspense, mystery and I have a feeling that it will have romance in future( I hope). I got a little confused in the first chapter, I didn't know you were explaining Kyle feelings. I think your book has potential so you should participate in the midsummer mystery contest. Good luck!

Interesting plotline

I really liked it. The plot is new and unique. The intro or prologue had really captured my interest. Keep up!

Interesting

Loved it👌👌 It gives a very mysterious vibe. Your writing style is awesome. Good luck!

Interesting

Loved it. Would love to read more🤩

AmAzing

The cover page was just awesome and the plotline really intrigued me. The book was just amazing. Would really appreciate a review on my book.

Amazing plot

Your book literally gave the mystery vibes. It was very interesting and I will love to read more. The prologue really captured my interest and as it was a mafia story so I absolutely loved it.

Interesting

I really like it. I will continue to read it. The plot is very intriguing and your writing style is just awesome.

Wow

I'm really interested to know more. I really feel bad for her. I know how she felt when she said that she is losing everything, I can relate to that. Your writing literally made me feel.keep up!

Interesting

I really like it. The prologue had really captured my interest. Meiyue character is really intriguing.keep up!!!

Interesting

It's very interesting. The cover page and prologue was just amazing. Would love to read more

Loved it

Your book is very unique. The cover page is very creative. I loved the book and the characters🤩😘i really enjoy reading it.

Loved it

I havent read many werewolfs stories but yours is just amazing and it was really interesting. I love it😍

Brimstone

I loved the story. It was so interesting.The writing style is so intriguing. The way you describe your characters was just wow.Keep up the good work

The warmth of the heart

its very interesting. Your writing style is very intriguing. The prologue was way more interesting.Keep up!!!

The beauty that tamed me

Your prologue was soo interesting and the way you describe your characters was amazing. I really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work!!

Virtues and vices

I really liked it.I wish there were more chapters.I WANT TO READ MORE!!!. I love these kind of novels. Your writing style is very funny and i really like it.Keep it up👍

Five words

I really love this novel to be honest.The end is although sad but its different and not like other novels.The story was very interesting.The best thing about this novel was its writing style.The end was soo freaking emotional that i literally cried😅but good job👍.