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I thought it was interesting and the style was different than most poems. Overall it was interesting.

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interesting

I also noticed some grammar errors, it is a little difficult to follow.

In some areas you jumped around and it was difficult to read. Needs some more work to make everything flow smoothly. The characters needs some work.

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Dance

I thought the story was compelling and very well written. I wanted to keep reading the words seem to flow together great.

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