Holly Honderd

Edmonton

I am a writer of all. Well, not all. Some. Most. We'll leave it at that.

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Thee first three chapters...

It was a good story overall, I would love to read to the end. There were punctuation issues and a lot of run-on sentences, but it will flow nicely when that is cleaned up. I liked the description of the marble and how it was sucked into her.

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