Humi

Rivendell

#Fantasy #Romance #OwnVoices Come for HEA, intense emotions, mature themes & action. No smut. www.humeirakazmi.com @humeiraajaz

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Stories to make you think

Many questions but short stories are supposed to intrigue and this one did. Very dark and readers must be warned beforehand but for anyone who reads this type of fiction, this one would surely grab their attention.

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Good Bones!!

This story has great potential. We read so much about a guy going through women like shirts so it's nice to finally read about a girl going through guys and she has a dark reason to as well. I would like to see her come around, grow up, find peace and not be in that toxic life because even she knows it's bad for her.

It's definitely a story that can trigger trauma and I really appreciate Brittany giving her readers ample warning before chapters. Keep it up, girl!! Love your characters!!

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It gets better with every page!

I’ve truly enjoyed working on this book and though I know every comma and corner of this manuscript, when I open it to a page, I still get pulled into Demon’s world for hours.

If you like epic fantasy, this book is a must!

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Love the Character Arcs

I like stories with character arcs and this one gives you that. The ending surprised me and I found myself rooting for a badass character - I tend to like the dark ones.

It was a fun read. Thank you for writing :)

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Love the dynamics

It held my interest! It's all about the supernatural and spirits and I like such stuff but that's not all....it has really cute emotional dynamics, weaving in the heavy with the light. I like that. The writing style confused me a bit in the beginning but I caught it early on and it was smooth sailing after that. I say the story has great potential. Great job!

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Sis Ka's Alpha

I usually wait till finishing a story to write a review but I jump into if I'm sure I will be reading it and HAVE TO SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE IT before I even finish it. So there it is guys. I'm loving this story! If you haven't read it, you have to read it!!

Go Sis Ka! You reeled me in :D

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Multiple POVs work!

I love the originality and though it’s my first time reading more than 2 POVs, it’s not confusing at all. Waiting for updates. And all that love confusion….Mina!!!!! Just go get him already 😭💕

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Do continue!

Is it engaging? Will I follow this story? Yes and yes! More please :)

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Very Intriguing

I've not finished the whole story but I'm loving it! I love how Ebony is devoted to her children. The mother in me totally gets that I love her for it. Can't wait to finish the rest of the book.

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Hauntingly Beautiful

This was hauntingly beautiful! I love how it’s written and all the mystery behind the words. Grammar is off here and there but I couldn’t care less while reading it. The story is captivating enough.

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It’s a mini saga

It’s like reading a movie and I find that to be the best part about any book. The only thing I would recommend is maybe author should put in a trigger warming for some scenes. All in all, I love how bold and creative the author has been!

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