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My father is a catholic priest

They were minor grammar mistakes but who am I to judge, English is not my primary language so I also have such mistakes in my stories as well, if not more.

I liked how the story started, the twist was unexpected, I was expecting a super scary horror scene but who would have thought that she was just dreaming.

However, the fact that Heather's father is a catholic priest kind of leaves me dumbfounded as I am a catholic too and in my country or to the best of my knowledge catholic priest don't get married or have kids, maybe I am wrong and need to further my knowledge about my own religion who knows.

All in all your story is intriguing, I feel a whole lot of mixed emotions while reading and I believe that the story can only get better.

Keep it up and i am rooting for you.

I have always loved a good mystery and trust me when I say this story is certainly one

My desire to read this story was not because mystery is my favorite genre, however, the moment I read the first sentence it was like my heart as a writer and a reader was captured and I found myself reading further than I had planned to, simply because the story was that good at drawing me in.

I absolutely adore the Authors writing style, as a writer myself I always wish to improve and I can proudly say I have learnt a thing or two from reading this story.

I love the way events are described, and how as you read on you keep wanting to know what next will happen? What secrets will be unfolded? What jigsaw puzzle will be solved?.

If you love mysteries then I highly recommend you give this a shot, so far so good the story haven't disappointed me yet.

And even if you don't love mysteries still give it a shot because it goes beyond the mysteries, it's so much more.

I Fell In-love With The Story Right After I Read It's Synopsis

Very well written, I especially love the way you describe your characters and everything around them, I could envision the environment like I was also a character in the story.

Xavier is a really mysterious character, it's really hard to figure him out, is he good or evil? are the questions that keep swirling in my head as I read., although I do have my hopes that he doesn't turn out too bad, however, that's just me fangirling.

I must say that I think as a writer myself, I can learn a thing or two from you.

Well done, and I hope to read more of this intriguing, captivating story of yours, I can't wait to read how it all comes to an end.

Call Me Conceited

Call me conceited but I love my story, I put in a lot of my energy into it and even if the world wants to see it as nonsense, which isn't totally the case right now but if that was the case I did still see it as super great.