iLyna_chAn

it's a mystery

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My father is a catholic priest

They were minor grammar mistakes but who am I to judge, English is not my primary language so I also have such mistakes in my stories as well, if not more.

I liked how the story started, the twist was unexpected, I was expecting a super scary horror scene but who would have thought that she was just dreaming.

However, the fact that Heather's father is a catholic priest kind of leaves me dumbfounded as I am a catholic too and in my country or to the best of my knowledge catholic priest don't get married or have kids, maybe I am wrong and need to further my knowledge about my own religion who knows.

All in all your story is intriguing, I feel a whole lot of mixed emotions while reading and I believe that the story can only get better.

Keep it up and i am rooting for you.

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I am not going to Lie

When I first saw this on one of the inkitt community pages, and due to the picture posted, I expected it to be super horror, I guess the author changed the genre, which I believe to be the right choice on the author's part.,

The author's writing style is something I admire, however, truth be told, the drama genre has never been my cup of tea, but I could still tolerate reading it and that goes to show you how okay the story is.

I am not going to lie, if you do choose to read this then you will have to be patient in other to get to the most interesting parts of the story because, if I am going to be fair in this review while reading the first three chapters I wasn't that encouraged to keep on reading, and the reason was simply that there were no that much compelling or very engaging events going on that could arouse the curiosity in me to read on, however, the more you read, the more you get to find out about the main character and his struggles.

I can't really judge the author's grammar skills in all honesty as English isn't my first language, however, with the little I know of, I think the grammar wasn't bad., maybe I am wrong, but that's left for you to decide after reading the story.

I wish the author all the best with this story and I hope you keep up the good work.

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Darkly Erotic

I for one will definitely not want to stumble upon such a Journal because every night I did have an eye opened, wondering if someone that sinister was really close by.

I really love the author's writing style and description of events, it draws you in, for those into BDSM I am certain you will love this, and even if you are not into that stuff, you still will get drawn to the plot and characters like a moth to a flame.

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SO STEAMY

If you are into the erotic genre then I will certainly recommend this for you.

Unlike some readers, I have no problem with the author using "You" instead of "I" because with the use of the word "You" it personalizes the reader's reading experience and makes one envision themselves as the character in the story, thereby in some way fulfilling certain forbidden erotical fantasies that the reader might have fantasized about at a certain point in their life.

I can't say anything about the grammar because that will be hypocritical on my part as English is not my first language, and even if the author may have made a mistake I might not have been able to pick it up, so I will be rating that a 5 as well.

This book is steamy, hot, passionate and will definitely make you horny, so I suggest that you read it somewhere very private except you wish to make your fantasy become a reality.

I hope that the author keeps up the good work because your story has really inspired me, I have always found it hard to write erotic scenes in my books as an author myself, however, I have learned a lot by reading your story, so I should thank you for that.

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I have always loved a good mystery and trust me when I say this story is certainly one

My desire to read this story was not because mystery is my favorite genre, however, the moment I read the first sentence it was like my heart as a writer and a reader was captured and I found myself reading further than I had planned to, simply because the story was that good at drawing me in.

I absolutely adore the Authors writing style, as a writer myself I always wish to improve and I can proudly say I have learnt a thing or two from reading this story.

I love the way events are described, and how as you read on you keep wanting to know what next will happen? What secrets will be unfolded? What jigsaw puzzle will be solved?.

If you love mysteries then I highly recommend you give this a shot, so far so good the story haven't disappointed me yet.

And even if you don't love mysteries still give it a shot because it goes beyond the mysteries, it's so much more.

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I Fell In-love With The Story Right After I Read It's Synopsis

Very well written, I especially love the way you describe your characters and everything around them, I could envision the environment like I was also a character in the story.

Xavier is a really mysterious character, it's really hard to figure him out, is he good or evil? are the questions that keep swirling in my head as I read., although I do have my hopes that he doesn't turn out too bad, however, that's just me fangirling.

I must say that I think as a writer myself, I can learn a thing or two from you.

Well done, and I hope to read more of this intriguing, captivating story of yours, I can't wait to read how it all comes to an end.

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Call Me Conceited

Call me conceited but I love my story, I put in a lot of my energy into it and even if the world wants to see it as nonsense, which isn't totally the case right now but if that was the case I did still see it as super great.

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