Ian Burkey

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Fantastic!

I want to start off by stating that you are great at setting a scene and describing the small and intricate details of scene without it being monotonous. The characters give off a vibe and are brought to life with this kind of writing and you nailed that.

I also want to say that the biggest blunder to this story would be your grammar and punctuation. A few words misspelled here and there along with commas that seemed out of place.

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Great Atmosphere!

The story so far is great. The atmosphere of the story seems great along with the introduction of the characters. I appreciate when authors give different characters their own "voice" and you nailed that.

I had to give 3 stars for grammar though because there were a few spelling errors out of character speech as of this review.

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Great Start!

This story starts off great and I applaud your attention to details that grasp the reader. The characters help bring this world to life, will definitely be watching how their characters develop in the future.

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