The Story continues
This has so much potential for a fully engaging story with its short sentence structure and somewhat hypnotizing repetition. My first thought was something along the lines of Alfred Hitchcock or the Twilight Zone. As the story progressed, the hopeless and mystery increased wondering what is going to happen to the main character and her state of mind.
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The turnaround in the end to send the plot into an unexpected direction added spark and left me wanting to read the sequel.
In the end, it is a glimpse into the mind of a write and the compulsion to write more and more and more....because a story never really ends and a writer never really discovers everything regardless who profits from the work.