Ice

I was born with something inside me that refuses to settle for average. I don't know what it is, but I'm glad I have it.

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Amazing

I love the plot of the story. It is very intriguing as well as the protagonist, Jill. I also liked the ominous and curiosity that is evoked to the reader. The author is very successful in showing the badass nature of the protagonist and all the elements of fantasy fits perfectly. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up author.

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Good

The author has potential. Good plot. I love the thoughts of characters. My personal opinion is that the story has no or little flow. That is just my opinion, I by no means am an expert. There are a few grammar mistakes. I commend the author on their integrity and I hope they continue to write. Keep up the work.

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Fantastic read

I commend the author for creating such an interesting short story. I love the personification of the ocean. I hope the author continues to write like this.

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Intriguing

The author has good diction that captivates the reader. I personally love the details about the main character, showing strong character development. I hope the author continues to write like this.

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Enchanting

I personally love Phyla as a badass character. I would suggest shorter paragraphs for easier reading but other than that it was an amazing read and I hope the author continues to write like this.

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Fantastic

I personally loved the introduction to each character, it created imagery in my mind and the author has a very convincing writing style, coaxing my mind into believing the story unfolds in front of me. I hope the author continues to write like this.

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Beautiful

I admire the imagery created by the author which instantly appears in my mind as if I am watching a movie. I must commend the author on this and I hope they would continue this wonderful work.

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Well-thought out

I love the introduction to our MC and the traumas she has been through since a young age. I commend the author on their writing and character development. Please do continue posting.

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Amazing

Even though I have just started the novel, I was fully captured into the novel. I commend the author on the realism showcased in the book about drug abuse and traumas. I hope the author will continue writing amazing work .

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