Ice

Amazing

I love the plot of the story. It is very intriguing as well as the protagonist, Jill. I also liked the ominous and curiosity that is evoked to the reader. The author is very successful in showing the badass nature of the protagonist and all the elements of fantasy fits perfectly. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up author.

The Third Red

It was a very interesting read. I must commend the author on their writing skills and on the creation of beautiful descriptions that truly captures the reader and makes them become emersed in this fictional world. Keep it up Author!

Good

The author has potential. Good plot. I love the thoughts of characters. My personal opinion is that the story has no or little flow. That is just my opinion, I by no means am an expert. There are a few grammar mistakes. I commend the author on their integrity and I hope they continue to write. Keep up the work.

Fantastic read

I commend the author for creating such an interesting short story. I love the personification of the ocean. I hope the author continues to write like this.

Enchanting

I personally love Phyla as a badass character. I would suggest shorter paragraphs for easier reading but other than that it was an amazing read and I hope the author continues to write like this.

Fantastic

I personally loved the introduction to each character, it created imagery in my mind and the author has a very convincing writing style, coaxing my mind into believing the story unfolds in front of me. I hope the author continues to write like this.

Beautiful

I admire the imagery created by the author which instantly appears in my mind as if I am watching a movie. I must commend the author on this and I hope they would continue this wonderful work.

Well-thought out

I love the introduction to our MC and the traumas she has been through since a young age. I commend the author on their writing and character development. Please do continue posting.