Imaginative addition to supernatural genre
Fantastic world building! This is a fairly complex story with interesting twists and turns, a good contribution to the usually cliche “chosen one” trope in the supernatural genre. Using dragons and tattoos also helped with separating this story from the rest.
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The second universe and the ending seemed a bit rushed, but her life in that first alternate universe was more than enough to flesh out what was needed to provoke emotional investment from the reader. There were some minor-ish issues with grammar and spelling, as well as some missing pieces, but those are easily fixed with some editing and proofreading.
All in all, I believe the author has produced a good work here and hope that they will continue to mature.