Iesha

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Wow thats was an engaging story

I did noticed a few missing and misspelled words but otherwise very well done. I really enjoyed the story it had me engaged from beginning to end of the fifth chapter. I also enjoyed how you actually a blurb in your summary of your story to engage your reader. That was definitely a very smart move. I might have to copy that.

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