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Magic✨

I have no idea how to review this.

Since I found this novel from the reviewing section, I was throttling and nitpicking the chapters to find something I can say to help you improve.
Alas, I didn't find anything.

You have done great work on setting up the story, the plot is interesting, the characters are well written and engaging.

Your book is like magic. One moment I'm a normal human on the earth, and the next in transported to that world.

Good job!

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Phenomenal

They say to draw interest from the first page is good, the first paragraph better but to do it from the first line? It's phenomenal.

You have done an amazing job on the characterization, the contrasting characters and the overall plot of the story.

The only thing that can make it better is a hardback cover of this completed novel.
I love it

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Worth reading a 100 times

Worth reading a 110 times!! ( okay, I'm exaggerating a bit )but this book is as amazing as it could be. Everything screams perfect. I've already read it thrice and the book isn't even complete yet.

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