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Magic✨

I have no idea how to review this.

Since I found this novel from the reviewing section, I was throttling and nitpicking the chapters to find something I can say to help you improve.
Alas, I didn't find anything.

You have done great work on setting up the story, the plot is interesting, the characters are well written and engaging.

Your book is like magic. One moment I'm a normal human on the earth, and the next in transported to that world.

Good job!

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Phenomenal

They say to draw interest from the first page is good, the first paragraph better but to do it from the first line? It's phenomenal.

You have done an amazing job on the characterization, the contrasting characters and the overall plot of the story.

The only thing that can make it better is a hardback cover of this completed novel.
I love it

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Unique and gripping

By just reading the summary, curiosity is on overdrive.

You do great work on building the curiosity for what's happening next, and the plot is very gripping. Nothing like I've ever read.

The only complaint I have is the grammatical errors and it seems that you have forgotten to proofread before publishing. If you can work on that, this would be a huge hit.

If I may, I'd suggest using Grammarly or Pro Writing Aid or any such tools (they are available for free and paid) to edit and proofread it. They make it easier to check grammatical errors and misspelt words.

Otherwise, good work!

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Worth reading a 100 times

Worth reading a 110 times!! ( okay, I'm exaggerating a bit )but this book is as amazing as it could be. Everything screams perfect. I've already read it thrice and the book isn't even complete yet.

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I'm in love

This is a beautifully written novel. It's not complete yet, but the author does a good work grabbing the readers attention and I can wait a whole eternity ,without losing interest, for the next update.

Except for the very few errors which can easily be overruled, there really is nothing that can better this novel.

Admittedly it's a little slow in the beginning, but this novel is definitely worth a try. It picks up speed in the later chapters and it's a ride you'll surely love, because I am.

The way it's written is almost poetic, I'm in love.

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