imcknight2002

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This was great

I love the way you pointed out the change in Percy's eyes. But I miss his parents. Why couldn't he have just had a relapse why'd they have to die?? But the Thalia Nico part kinda came out of nowhere. Overall you did a really great job. Umm, This alert keeps saying it has to be over 200 characters which is kinda stupid but whatever. I already said what I had to say. You know great story and I can't wait to read the sequel. Just waiting for these over 200 characters and whatever.

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Omg

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I love this story sooooooooooo much please update. Oh my god I am freaking dying on the inside. Pleeeeaaaaassse. I love the percabeth it's such a cute, simple, nice story you know. I really love it. Update soon.

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