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O-M-G

This book is all that and a bag of chips. The book is so good I was speed-reading. Drawn in, but there was one passage that made me sit straight up!!!! Honey! I put it below:

I used to think I had those nightmares because of the last things I thought about when I fell asleep…

But that couldn’t be the case because just the other night, after killing a victim when he was getting off work at a power plant in Wisconsin—exhausted from 13 hours of slave-type dictatorship from a vicious tyrant without heart and emotion—I thought of wealth, prosperity and the law of attraction when I fell into a deep slumber, and I had a nightmare about the Atlantic Ocean swallowing me whole.

I awakened after an hour of drowning and flapping my arms and legs without an ounce of light in sight, panting and barbaric.

I knew it was the Atlantic Ocean because I can still taste remnants of dead slaves, from hundreds of years ago, lingering in my esophagus right this instant.



^^^^^^^^^^^^^STANDING OVATION!!!!

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Slays

What an incredible journey this story has taken me on. From epic battles to questions of our faith in the Most High to challenging what we were taught, I learned a lot about myself as a human being. For an independent author with no A list publisher, it isn't Dapharoah that's going to miss out. The publishers will miss an epic series in the making. Equally as good as the first book.

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Shakespeare he's not

Don't waste your energy folks. For someone that is giving one star ratings on every story on the site, he most certainly can't judge with this lack of imaginative storytelling. Oops, I'm sorry. Even that is giving him too much credit.

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