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A hidden diamond
The first couple of chapters are almost as if written by a different person until the writer finds his writing style. Then the plot took of to travel me to a world of coporate managing and success in a comedy that reminds me a lot of much ado about nothing. It is refreshing to finally see a writer that rereads his work, self corrects it, and improves on it. Well done.
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