irum98azam

Lahore, Pakistan

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My new favorite book on Inkitt.

There is nothing I don't love about his book. From the setting to the characters everything is amazing.
I ship Sairose with Onyx.
Well done, author. You are really talented.

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Love it!

This story has an interesting and unique concept. Love the three brothers. Great book. I want to read more. ๐Ÿ‘

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Intriguing story!

The author has created an interesting world full of secrets. I love it. ๐Ÿฅฐ Good job. Can't wait for more chapters. โฃ๏ธ

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Wow! The sex scene was really spicy. Love it.๐Ÿ”ฅ

I enjoyed your writing style and the sex of course. ๐Ÿ”ฅ
It would be better if the paragraphs weren't too long.
Love it. Keep writing. ๐Ÿ”ฅโฃ๏ธ

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An interesting beginning

I can already see this book is going to be a good one. I like how well you have written the first chapter without revealing too much.
I so want to know more about the little girl and the world where the Mc is trapped. Good job, author! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™‚

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I couldn't stop reading!

I am not a fan of werewolf books, but this once is an exception. The author has successfully written a gripping story with only a handful of characters.
The mc is a strong woman. And blaze is a sweetheart. I so want them to get together after giving Sandro what he deserves.
I love this book. And I am waiting for more. Well done author. ๐Ÿ‘

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The best book I have read this year.

The plot is truly captivating and unique. The main character Damian is so interesting. The author has given him a strong voice. I feel like I really know Damian and he is real.
It's such a great twist that he gets to learn about his crush living his life. I so want to know more about Cicero and what happened to him.
Waiting for more chapters.
Well done author. You are truly talented. ๐Ÿ‘

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Great story

You have created a really interesting world. And now I want to know more about the Hybrid Prince. So far so good.

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Hot stuff ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Wow, you write so well. I could actually imagine the scenes in my head.
This stuff is sizzling ๐Ÿฅต
I want more. Keep it up. ๐Ÿ‘

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Promising start

I loved what I read. Strong characters and an interesting start. More chapters please!

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Amazing book

This book keeps you on the edge of your seat. So many unexpected twists and turns. Love the drama and the characters. Keep it up. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘โฃ๏ธ

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So spicy and interesting!

I didn't expect good twists in an erotica. The main character's chemistry is on fire.
I love it. A lot of hot sex and interesting twists make a perfect erotic book in my opinion.

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I love it!

I like the characters and how the author tells us about both of their point of view. They both have feelings for each other and are afraid to say anything. I am a sucker for romance!
I also like how you started the book.
Their story seems promising.

My suggestions: It would be better if you wrote the book using the first person. (The characters have a lot of thoughts). I think it would be better, no pressure. :)
Secondly, I think you should mention it at the top before switching between points of view. (e.g. Fran's Pov or Joe's Pov.

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In love with your writing!

Poetry is hard. It's not easy to write a compelling plot using only a few creative sentences. You are smart and a good writer. Love it.

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I like it!

I feel so sad for Gareth.
Good start. Keep it up.
Cant wait for more!

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I like it so far

Love it! There should me more stories about dragons. I hope it's going to be long story and that I'll get to know more about the characters.

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Love it so far

I want to see them fall in love so badly, <3

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It's good

I hate the ending! Super horrible

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