Ivan Voinov

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Fantastic story!

To get this out of the way, there were some incredibly minor punctuation errors - but, that's really not important.

I loved the story, I loved the straightforward descriptions, it seemed quite realistic. I honestly would love to hear more stories about the Scarrowcroft Manor, from various perspectives, maybe where it came from? I don't know. I greatly enjoyed the choppiness of the story, due to its format.

Having said that, I didn't quite understand why the demon was so terrifying - I would personally want to at least explore more about that demon, since, in my head, said demon is the only thing that supplies the main character's food. Maybe a thank you and an explanation could be in order? :D I'm really digging for details at this point.

Fantastic story!

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