I think you did a terrific job with this story. I can certainly tell you've done your homework and that you may be a Browncoat!! It's truly a dream come true to have Wash back again. :)
I found myself immersed in your story very quickly, and even found myself hearing the character's voices in my head as I read along. (In a good way, of course! No Crazy Pants, here! lol!)
Hope you continue on with your Browncoat adventure.
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