J Rabit

Love is his religion, and the only path to salvation. The Gatekeeper

Not following anyone yet

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There is potential

When the story begin, I felt there were details could be left out. Then I thought why waste time
when every stories have a life of itself, and if you try to alternate it, the result will be the same.

So I told myself to give it a try to leave you a comment to express the potential of your writing that
you already know you have. Keep up the good works.

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VERY INTERESTING

Its a very interesting read. Very different from other science fiction books out there.
Although I am not a science guy, but you really hooked me in to the story. I also like
your writing, very intuitive.

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your writing is beautiful

Your writing has a directness to it. you are beautiful in your own way and don't let anyone convince you otherwise. It is a message all girls of that age should receive. Good Job!

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