Jada

I dunno. Iโ€™m bored. Donโ€™t ask me shit. Let me read in peace.

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I donโ€™t even know anymore

See, it wasnโ€™t the worst but like. . . Did he shit a baby?
I looked pasted everything but that. It was fantastic until I found out he shit a baby.

But DAMN! His dad??๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณI felt so bad for him, I actually shed tears.

Btw: I LOVED IT

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Great great great. Only minor tweak๐Ÿ˜

The only thing that was kind of annoying was the long paragraphs of fill in I didnโ€™t read. It was to long and made my eyes hurt so I skipped over it. Then I learn that paragraph that was 800 words alone was very important and I have to go back to chapter 9 when Iโ€™m on chapter 23 to find out what happened. (Example not real thing)

BUTTTT NOW THAT THATS OVER! LOVED EVERYTHING ELSE!!! ALOUGH THE NAMES WERE CHALLENGING! DONT KNOW HOW TO PRONOUNCE RHYS! BUT LOVE KALE (NOT THE NAME) HES ADORABLE! LITERALLY WISH HAYDES WAS A REALY PERSON! MARK IS THE BEST BOYFRIEND EVER!!!! WISH I HAD HIM (DONT GET ME STARTED ON WHAT I DO HAVE!๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’)
anyway yeah

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Um. . .so that happened

Everythingโ€™s a four because itโ€™s great but not quite perfect. I was mad at there relationship but oddly loved it at the same time. Not much character development. But I do recommend for quick read to be done and over. Love love loved it. I thought it was awesome.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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I thought it was good. Loved

I give 4.7 stars because everything except the fact that the relationships were a bit rushed was perfect. And even then; itโ€™s high school so Iโ€™m not judging. And my first relationship was at eleven and Iโ€™d only really hung out with her 4 days before dating her.๐Ÿซข๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜ณdonโ€™t discuss. But everything else was spectacular.

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Low-key in love

I recommend this book to people above 14. Love love love. Literally the best. Iโ€™m so in love with Leo and Milan as individual characters itโ€™s not even funny. 4.7 stars. Love love ๐Ÿ’•

Okay so now that like. . .Iโ€™ve read more. Maybe you should be like. . .17๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ forgive me. I still love everything about this book. Too addicting, good names, great character development, no one pisses you off, not to much fill in paragraphs of blah blah blah. Literally perfect. TELL ME MORE LIKE THIS!!! 5.0 STARS AT THIS POINT!!!๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐ŸคŽ๐ŸคŽ๐ŸคŽ๐ŸคŽ๐ŸคŽโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅโค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

Now that Iโ€™ve finished it I have more. Tears. Literal tears. I loved this whole thing and someone make this an actual book. My heart hurts now. All I can write is . . . . . .. I loved it.๐Ÿ˜ญโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Great

I choose an overall 4 star rating because I liked it. I was literally in love with the ending so brownie points to that. Not that I hated Faith or anything, but like. . .i was just waiting for him and Seth to get together.

I recommend it to ages from 12-15 or 16. No cursing no sex, kissing is all. Literally loved

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The love in this book is instant and Iโ€™m not fond of that but for those who are this is perfect. There isnโ€™t a plot really but there are problems. Very cringy but good never the less. Over all I give it a 3.5-4

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Great

I think itโ€™s starting off great. Mark Miller and Clarisa Blaire, are amazing

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I was in love.๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ

This whole thing was so cute. I give it five starts and recommend it to whoever. I was in love.๐Ÿฅฐโค๏ธ

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It was good

I liked Nico and Willโ€™s relationship, and I would recommend it for anyone above 12. Because itโ€™s written in a kid manner but the stuff in it isnโ€™t kiddish. So yeah. And overal Iโ€™d give it a 3.7

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