Jaime

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Captivating

I honestly couldn't stop reading. I literally jumped at the part when she was at in the store alone, I didn't expect that to happen.

I know this is a short story and you wrote it a while back but I really hope that you consider re writing and add more in. The end was rushed and there was so much that you could have elaborated on.

Truly a weird concept but you wrote it so well.

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