James R. Stevenson

Hong Kong

I incorporate my experiences from around the world into my writing, much of which takes place in Asia which has a rich fabric to add texture to my stories.

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Captivating read

The package is a tightly woven story that mixes fiction with history, and fluctuates effectively between the past and present. The reader is often in for a treat with this well crafted story, that questions christianity and implicates a major figure from the bible into creating a fraud. The writer could improve his book by cutting down on the lengthy descriptive passages in the opening chapters. Likewise, the pace of the story could be improved. Too often, the reader has to wade through lengthy dialogue between the characters that often turns into a discourse on religion or conspiracy theory, becoming tedious for the reader who is left wanting to get on with the story. A recommended edit could bring about a great novel, albeit a controversial one.

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A good story that could be great

Reading the first few pages of the story brought a smile to my face, I knew I was in for a treat. I really enjoy the poetic quality of your writing, and the way you develop your characters. However, to make this a really great story you need to give it more structure. I thought the plot drifted at times, and it wasn't always easy to follow the storyline. Some of the passages were big blocks of texts, no reader likes to face that. You have a gem of a story, it just needs some polishing. Stick with it!

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