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The Battle for Hart's Pass

I am immediately transported to this new world through the ease of the author's words. The action of the story begins within a few paragraphs as the author skillfully introduces vivid characters. The author brings this story to life with beautifully chosen words, some like poetry.

"Raucous laughter broke out and shattered the severity that had previously pervaded the room."

Although this is one of my favorites, I enjoyed every line.

Excellent Work!

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