This story is very interesting, I think i have an idea of the plot and what's coming but (and this is my opinion only) I think it does have a few holes that, either are just taking too long to be filled, or they just need work. There are too many people involved that, to me, seems have nothing to do with each other. Maybe if there was more explanations as to how everyone is related then it would be awesome.
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Maybe I am just a little particular and I can be Very picky but i just keep waiting for the reveal that I just don't see coming. I can be a little impatient, but honestly i can't finish the story. I'm very curious but the lack of editing and that wait of the big reveal just took my attention away from it. It has So much potential, and many most likely will disagree with me, but this is just my honest opinion. Im pretty sure if the edited version came out I would read it and finish it, and if it's out please let me know. I'm so sorry :(