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One word: Amazing.

this felt like reading a life experience more than a novel. Hun you've truly got a gift for making people weave themselves into your story. I couldn't resist clicking the next chapter till my dad yelled at me to go sleep and I was at chapter 40 then. I mostly couldn't sleep and the first thing I did this morning was to start from where I had left off last night. This is simply amazing. everything was so real, this had almost no feeling of fiction at all. Here and there some things seemed a bit rushed but all in all this is one of the best books I have read in a while. I hope you write more where (spoiler alert guys I'm sorry) all the characters involved find their chance at love.

I'll look forward to more novels from you. ^^

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Cute

A very cute short story with a good balance of all elements. The writing is quite detailed giving a visual image of what is being read which quite a commendable quality in writing. Just a small pattern that I have noticed is that there is no paragraph breaker between events that have elapsed time and also sometimes you have tended to jump through the events without a good flow. Overall the story is a really good one, moreover the story plot line is something I haven't come across so far. I'm looking forward to reading more stories by you.

Best regards.

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Purely amazing

Please please continue the story or link up a sequel. its absolutely beautiful. i never knew such complex expressions could be explained through words...this story is simply beautiful. i have no other words other than asking for the sequel

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Breathtaking

Very down to earth and absolutely realistic. You managed to capture what we would feel should we actually for our opposite gender best friend. there was absolutely no 'miracles', no unrealistic 'coincidences' or any 'miracle-workers'. the story remained real and had such a life like feeling to it, it felt like i was reading a person's life experience. absolutely wonderful and a surely read worthy story. i hope you write more ^-^

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Classic.

I am generally a person who cant stop reading when I read a book but oh god yours didn't even let me get a good night's sleep. I sat through and finished all the chapters in one sitting (it helped that I'm a fast reader. Oh the joys of being a bookworm xD). All the raw emotions expressed in words made me have a visual of what I was reading. I'm a total nazi for detail (your grammar could use some work) but I'm glad to say I wasn't disappointed at all. I hope you write more and hone your skills even further :D

It wouldn't have hurt to see how Klaus would've reacted to Chloe and Nico though. That would've made an interesting chapter. All in all I'm totally happy with a book and i would recommend this as a read.

I'll look forward to reading more of your imagination :)

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Cute. Short. Simple.

Very interesting story plot. I liked the way the story carried itself out. You have a good knack for writing. I'm a little disappointed the book ended this early. I was hoping for some wedding dress, cake and boquet throwing action but it ended quite well.

I'll look forward to reading more from you ^^

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The story

Absolutely a page turner (i mean next chapter clicker) i couldnt stop myself. it was a really gripping story. some chapters went into too much detail but all is good. its a beautiful story. i hope you write more ^-^

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